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Friday, October 1, 2021

Yavnit The Ancient Temple Narrative Writing

 Hey readers/bloggers

Today we have been doing narrative writing about a story. We had to choose what story we want and it does not have to be a story in a book. We all made up a story and then started to write. Before we started to write, we first had to put parts of our story into template. We ha had a beginning, middle, Problem, Resolution and a ending into our story. We had to use descriptive words in our story so it is not a boring story that no one wants to read.  Narrative writing is about entertaining the reader and show an exciting scene of our story.  My story is a long writing with 3 pages. We had to choose to write our story on our template or on a new google docs.  Here is my story.





















































I hope you enjoyed this blog. Please comment and have a great day.

6 comments:

  1. When I first looked at this blog Yavnit I was reluctant to read it because it is so long,but then I started and your words got me hooked.
    It sounds like you took the best team to go diving with.
    I like that you ended the story making us wonder what is going to happen next. Well done.

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  2. Have a great last week of the holidays Yavnit.We have school next week :0

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    1. Thanks for commenting on my blog. I knew I could hook someone up to read my writing. Could you explain what reluctant mean. But thanks for commenting.

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    2. reluctant means-you are going to do something but don't really want to do it.
      Have a great term 4 :)

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    3. Hey Miss Cassidy, Thanks for telling me what the words mean so I can use it in my writing. I hope you are having a good day back at school.

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  3. Hey Yavnit I am suprised that you have a very long writing and the amazing
    describing word you have written My favourite part of your writing is Like My hand is going in slow-mo I keeping on heading near and near the Ancient Temple I hope you have a great day bye.

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