Monday, April 20, 2020
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Hi Yavnit
ReplyDeleteThis is an amazing lot of work you have been doing. You have really used your imagination. The one where the dog could talk was really funny, didn't matter what the human said, the dog only wanted food - very cool!!
Also liked the great descriptive words you used in the climbing stairs story, imagine getting all the way to the top and finding nothing - AAAHHH! Remember that "I" needs to be a capital in a story, because its a name.
Your imagination in the 'Box' story is very interesting, made me want to read more.
Keep up the blogging, its great to read your work.
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ReplyDeleteWow, I didn't expect you to complete all the writing prompts! My favourite is Yellow and whitish floating box one. I like the way you have used description in your writing and that you have included people talking. Next time it would be great to see you picking even just one prompt and writing a longer story with more detail and a beginning, middle and end. I'm looking forward to reading more of your great writing soon.
ReplyDeleteHi Yavnit. I like the story that you wrote about the shining light box in the forest. Your descriptive writing had me wondering what is going to happen next. Are you able to extend this story and give more detail? I would love to find out what happens. I look forward to reading it.
ReplyDeleteWOW Yavnit!you have put in a great effort with this writing.I like the story about the dog talking.I often look at my dog and wonder what he'd say if he could talk.
ReplyDeleteDid you know that the whale shark only eats things like small fish or plankton?.
I am looking forward to reading the next chapter to the light box story.I want to know what happened to you when you got dragged into the room.
Have a great week.
thank you but it took me so long that i had to do hard on it Mrs Mclachlan
Deletei could'ev put some more word on the dog part and said to the dog to get out of my house
Deleteyou are going to find out keri. your mytery is in your hand
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