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Thursday, April 30, 2020

writing


1 comment:

  1. Hi Yavnit,
    I like your writing. You did a good job. maybe next time you could get more creative. Where you talked about the sea bit that's an aquarium. The glass is very strong it has a lot of layers so they would have to hit a lot of times. Bye have lovely time.
    From Leo.

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