Descriptive writing

 Hey readers,

We have been doing a descriptive writing about a Spacecraft or a tree house. I picked a tree house because I think nature is a good way to explore. We chose whatever character we want in our story. I chose a mouse because I like mouses. Here is my descriptive writing. 

I was in my house until a mad scientist put me in a machine that turned me into a rat. He grabbed me and put me in an old treehouse with no food and water. I can hear a river near by the treehouse. The tree house was so big I fell right off the ladder while going down. I went in a search of food. I only saw some fruit growing on the trees. They were to high up and I could not get them. One person came by and then pickup the fruit and then one fell.I quickly grabbed it and ran straight into the treehouse. I ate up the fruit and went straight to the river near by. As I was walking towards the river I noticed that there was a friendly baby fox lying down. I could not leave him so I picked up the fox and walked to the river. Before I picked him up, I noticed he got shrunken into a small fox that was about the size of me.When we made it, the fox jumped with joy and went to the river and starting to drink furiously. I was starting to get cold so I drank some water and then went to the treehouse. The fox was smelling bad and looked very bad. I can still taste the fruit in my mouth. I see a string along the 2 trees. I went under it and the string felt really hot so I jumped with burning feeling and started sprinting into a puddle. It started to get cold so me and the fox went inside the treehouse. In the next morning, nature grows and the multicolored flowers in different colors. The tree was growing fruit freshly. I went  and then a fruit fell. I noticed it was a Jackfruit. I got a stoned up knife and a stick as a handle. I bashed up the Jackfruit. I heard some people and then the mad scientist made me human again and then ran home.

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