Hey readers, today I am going to share a story. It was made by Feana Tu‘akoi, tyui. The story was about 2 brothers getting punished by spearing their dad. The people let them go to the waterhole. The 2 brothers hit a man with a spear and the man could not walk properly.The watering hole has a creature and the 2 brothers had to get water from the waterhole. Their dad was angry at the 2 brothers. Then they had to go somewhere far away to go south.
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, November 6, 2020
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Hello Yavnit.
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like this would be a good story to read.
Maybe next time you might want to add a picture from the book so it gives us something to relate your writing too.