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Wednesday, October 14, 2020

The flower festival

 Hey readers. today my class was drawing some flower for the flower festival.

Here is the picture of my flower. My picture has not been finished. And some of the parts of the flowers are long and also this is the picture that I was copying. 




I hope you enjoyed this blog and like my flower. when we are still doing it I will rub out the long bits and my it short.  What could I do to improve my drawing?

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2 comments:

  1. KeriOctober 14, 2020 at 12:50 PM

    Hi Yavnit. Thanks for sharing your first draft. I think you are correct about needing to change the petal shape to be shorter and more rounded like the original. I also think it would be good to add more detail to the centre of the flower.

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  2. Mrs CassidyOctober 26, 2020 at 4:47 PM

    Hello yavnit.
    I look forward to seeing your completed flower.You have done a good job at making the petals pointed at the ends and I like the way that you have drawn them close together.
    Maybe next time you could draw the middle part of the flower so that its facing the left side of the page.

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