Hello everyone and I am going to share my writing about returning to school and how I was feeling going back to school. Here is my writing.
Is my writing good or do I need to put some more writing to make it look more perfect.
We had to put some feelings in because we needed to know why we were feeling that way?
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Monday, May 25, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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ReplyDeleteHello Yavnit.
ReplyDeleteI hope you are feeling as happy as the boy is.I was a bit nervous about coming back to school.I think it's because I hadn't seen any of the staff members for a while.
How are you feeling now?.
Hello Yavnit.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.
Hi Yavnit.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I can't wait to see what other work you have been doing in class.Have a great week.
Hello Yavnit.
ReplyDeleteJust a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I look forward to seeing some more of the learning you have been doing in class soon.
Um Laura what do you mean about this comment has been removed by the author?
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