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Friday, September 6, 2019

2 music story starter

in writing we have been learning about 2 music story starter. This is my second 2  music story starter.



There was an elephant in jail. He drawed marks how many days he has been in jail.
He used a rock to break out and a black monkey was chasing the elephant.
The zoo keepers was chasing after the elephant. He got on his bike and rode away from the zoo. 
He went through the buildings.He went to the bike shop to get a sprint bike.
When the elephant put the money down on the counter.
The man said no take the one wheel bike. The elephant got on the road one wheel bike.
When he got off the bike and went in the forest he saw his friends and mum and dad.They were happy.

2 comments:

  1. hey yavnit its casper.next time you could take a screen shot of your writing instead of its going off the screen.i like how you put the word zookeepers in your story.

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    1. Hey Yavnit it me Nijesh i like your blog story but your story is not in the page. Next time you can fix it and put it on the page.

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