I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, August 22, 2019
Titanium
This is a story I wrote after I watched the music video Titanium. I chose this video because I like when he gets the keys without grabbing the keys normally. Hope you enjoy my story.
In the morning there was a boy at school. He saw that the school was wrecked. There were thousands of pieces of paper and wood and cement on the floor. The boy got up and saw a teacher in a classroom. The teacher was on the phone, then she closed the door when she saw the boy. The boy put his hat on and walked to the front door of the school.
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Hello Yavnit. I did enjoy your story. You included a lot of detail and explained the story really well. Good job.
ReplyDeleteThank you mr martin for looking on my blog.I have been working hard on my story for like 4 or 5 days to write my story.
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