hello.we were learning about how to make an awesome commenting.This is what we have to comment.
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, May 22, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Good morning Yavnit.You have made an easy to read poster.The pictures goes with some of your writing.Maybe next time you could spread more of your writing around the page to fill up the space or even give an idea as to what someone could say.
ReplyDeletethank you for looking at my blog miss cassidy
ReplyDeleteHello Yavnit.
ReplyDeleteThis is just a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog.
I look forward to reading your Diving story when you post it.
I hope you are having a great weekend.
Hi Yavnit,
ReplyDeleteIt's Jherean here! I really like how you tell us how to make an awesome comment. Your writing is very clear. I also like the way you put a picture. The only thing I notice that you forgot is your conclusion (Saying Thank you and good bye). But it's still awesome blog. Have you commented on someone else blog? Thank you. Have an awesome day bye!
Thanks Jherean. Do you think I could add some more on it.
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